Reviews for The First Block
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Love it. If it is indeed about writer's block, as one of the reviewers suggested, it definitely works, and I love the end. Not giving in and continuing in spite of him. Great. Keep writing! :)
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Wow, this is hauntingly beautiful. "this hallow image of a man,

a shade,he loomed over my past like a shadow" - Oh yes, I know how this feels. Amazing poem overall! Keep writing!

~Anna~ _
Punslinger chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Very well done. If the title refers to writer's block, I'm sure we all can identify with that. It also describes my periods of depression which put my mind in a fog that makes everything seem unreal. At least it makes me appreciate normalcy all the more when it's over.