Reviews for the way the cookie crumbled
Jejuna chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
awwwwh. that hits close to home.
arrhythmias chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
this fucking poem, oh my god. everything about it is so utterly perfect. 'but still - i stand by my conviction./ if things had been/ a little different, if i had/ been prepared for the world, if you had been/ gentler with me -/ you and me, we really could have been something.' i relate to it awfully well :/ great job, though! nice to see you back on the site (:
OctoberSky13 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
I loved it! I feel like this poem should be sent to every girl in the universe, and become a renowned piece of literature!