Reviews for Unintended
Guest chapter 27 . 1/27/2013
Noooo Wayyy! I'm Snii..fiing...! Awwwwww! Such A Happy Ending! I've Jumped Into THis Book EverydAY! I Cant belive i've actually finished it! Yuu R A great writer...you should join wattpad! ppple will luve ur book if yuu upload it!:):)xxx
Guest chapter 25 . 1/26/2013
YES!:_xxx
Guest chapter 21 . 1/26/2013
It was perfect...I think! The suspense was great! R they gunna have a baby or something? Plzzz do! It wud Be Gr8!:_xxx
Guest chapter 20 . 1/26/2013
YUP!xxx
Guest chapter 19 . 1/26/2013
WOW! AGAIN! Soooo ENCHANTIIIIING!:)xxx
Guest chapter 18 . 1/26/2013
I Luve the way you describe everythign soooo...! WOW! Keep It UP! I Lurrrve IT!:):)xxx
Guest chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
GR88888888888888888888888888 8888888!:)xx I'm LUrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrvin IT!:):)xxx
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 27 . 5/4/2012
That was such an amazing epilogue! I really enjoyed it, and I have to agree... What a perfect family!
Greeneyes616 chapter 27 . 5/1/2012
This is such a wonderful story. I love how you developed the characters, and the ending was so sweet.
Smartgirl94 chapter 27 . 4/29/2012
Aww what a sweet chapter, too bad it ended. Hope you have more soon :D
Nomad chapter 14 . 3/13/2012
First time reading your story here. I'm not yet finished but I need to comment...

First, allow me to say this story is very predictable. The plot was very simple though I don't mind it but with the dialogues..nothing special.

Second, Lissa is the kind of character that I hate. It's very clear in the early chapters she likes Ethan yet she acts sooo scared to be hurt again only to let Ian sleep with her...Damn, isn't it confusing for her character? She's the kind of woman I don't like my boyFRIENDs to date. EVER!

As I will guess the next chapter will involve Ethan and Lissa to be together because they're both single. Sorry again...so PREDICTABLE.

But I will not abandon this, I will finish reading the story.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 26 . 3/8/2012
Awww, That sounds good :)

I've been enjoying it but all good things must come to an end I guess!
J chapter 26 . 3/4/2012
You almost could end it right there, as much as I hate endings that don't tell you what happens next it's such a happy chapter!
Smartgirl94 chapter 26 . 3/3/2012
Do an epilogue, with her with her with child. Please update soon :D
captainmoosen chapter 26 . 3/3/2012
epilogue! a very lemony one! lol i love these two!
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