Reviews for Unintended |
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![]() ![]() Noooo Wayyy! I'm Snii..fiing...! Awwwwww! Such A Happy Ending! I've Jumped Into THis Book EverydAY! I Cant belive i've actually finished it! Yuu R A great writer...you should join wattpad! ppple will luve ur book if yuu upload it!:):)xxx |
![]() ![]() YES!:_xxx |
![]() ![]() It was perfect...I think! The suspense was great! R they gunna have a baby or something? Plzzz do! It wud Be Gr8!:_xxx |
![]() ![]() YUP!xxx |
![]() ![]() WOW! AGAIN! Soooo ENCHANTIIIIING!:)xxx |
![]() ![]() I Luve the way you describe everythign soooo...! WOW! Keep It UP! I Lurrrve IT!:):)xxx |
![]() ![]() GR88888888888888888888888888 8888888!:)xx I'm LUrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrvin IT!:):)xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such an amazing epilogue! I really enjoyed it, and I have to agree... What a perfect family! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a wonderful story. I love how you developed the characters, and the ending was so sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww what a sweet chapter, too bad it ended. Hope you have more soon :D |
![]() ![]() First time reading your story here. I'm not yet finished but I need to comment... First, allow me to say this story is very predictable. The plot was very simple though I don't mind it but with the dialogues..nothing special. Second, Lissa is the kind of character that I hate. It's very clear in the early chapters she likes Ethan yet she acts sooo scared to be hurt again only to let Ian sleep with her...Damn, isn't it confusing for her character? She's the kind of woman I don't like my boyFRIENDs to date. EVER! As I will guess the next chapter will involve Ethan and Lissa to be together because they're both single. Sorry again...so PREDICTABLE. But I will not abandon this, I will finish reading the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, That sounds good :) I've been enjoying it but all good things must come to an end I guess! |
![]() ![]() You almost could end it right there, as much as I hate endings that don't tell you what happens next it's such a happy chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do an epilogue, with her with her with child. Please update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() epilogue! a very lemony one! lol i love these two! |