|Reviews for Breaking Free|
| rachellynngross chapter 23 . 10/19/2011
finally good chapter
| 2awesomeforyou chapter 23 . 10/19/2011
SO MUCH FLUFF!
Haha yes Hikari has paired, way to go!
Love the chapter lol, Angela i bet that game would have been extremely awesome.
| brit02 chapter 22 . 10/16/2011
THAT WAS SO AWESOME! I was worried about Gerald for a while there, but all's good :D
| 2awesomeforyou chapter 22 . 10/11/2011
THAT WAS EXTREMELY AWESOME!
I can't get that spells image out of my head it was so..so...AWESOME, RAD and any other words that are cool.
I hope thats not the end, Wow it was just a crazy action movie like.
| rachellynngross chapter 22 . 10/11/2011
epic chapter as always
| rachellynngross chapter 21 . 10/9/2011
i love hikari
| 2awesomeforyou chapter 21 . 10/9/2011
Wait, so now does every paring have a handshake? Sometimes I think I know all there is about pairings, then there sometimes when I don't.
Ren has some cool lines, they really speak to the heart.
Update soon, or I'll fine a way to slow Angela down, I swear it!
| brit02 chapter 21 . 10/9/2011
I loved this fluffy chapter :) And I like dhow you didn't only concentrate on Renaia and Gerald, but Hikari and Chris too! And I liked what you said about Hikari's heart- with the walls crashing down and Chris the only soldier left standing in front of it.
| brit02 chapter 20 . 10/8/2011
I just died of cuteness. For realz.
| brit02 chapter 19 . 10/8/2011
"I thought I was going to regret saving Gerald!" calls Renaia.
I think you didn't mean to say that O.o Sorry I haven't read this in a while, I've barely had time :'( But this chapter was amazing! Finally, Isis is gone! And Renaia and gerald have figured out a way to be better fighters XD
Btw, you know the characters you made for ES? Well, why not have them in a story like this? With mages but they specialise in one thing? That way you can use their elements :) And their familiars could be the animal...or something, lol.
| 2awesomeforyou chapter 20 . 10/5/2011
Ahhhhhhhhh that's was soooooooo cute!
That just topped my "All time Moe" list ahhhhhh it's just too awesome! Lol
This chpt made my day, just so cute.
Update soon beforei die from too much Moe! Lol
| rachellynngross chapter 20 . 10/5/2011
| 2awesomeforyou chapter 19 . 10/4/2011
Thats one way to start a morning.
great chpt update soon
| rachellynngross chapter 19 . 10/4/2011
no fair, i want cool music while i fight
| rachellynngross chapter 18 . 10/2/2011
nice chapter, even if i did have to read it with one eye just to see lol