Ooh, twist on the highschool-story, love it. So uh, a couple of minor grammatical errors, i.e., "What Highschool are you going to, again?" when it should really be "What highschool are you going to again?" I don't know, I'm not really big on Juliette. She seemed a tad petulant and vapid through that entire chapter.

But it was very well written and you've constructed the characters really well. I'm really interested to read what happens next between Juliette and Roman.