|Reviews for Islebound|
| TheBroet chapter 1 . 1/17
So this is like a high school drama in a medieval setting?
| Dances with sloths chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Ok so I'm not quite sure if this is a prologue or what, but that's what I gathered from this. The names are AWESOME. you clearly spent a lot of time. Descriptions of the battle scenes are pretty good but can be better. The main problem was that I was confused most of the time. I may just be a dumb kid (haha) but I had to re-read some passages a bunch of times to get an idea of what was going on. That's why I thought it was a prologue because the main characters haven't come out yet and the setting hasn't been established. Speaking of the setting, where is this place and when is this happening? You're talking about submarines (circa 1940's- today) and cannons (long-ass time ago until like WWI) so some stuff is a bit unclear. BUT either way, it was an exciting way to kick of the new story. Keep it up!