|Reviews for detached|
| bjbjnjnk chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
hey, i just realized it's now christmas eve (at least in england, it is)
anyways, (i tend to use that word a lot) i think this is like the fourth one of your poems that i've been able to relate to - which is nice, because i don't often find writing of any kind that i can relate to. insomnia sucks, but it's generally something you have to put up with when you're schizophrenic.
i think i prefer the first one but i also love the changes you made and the lines you added in the second one.