Reviews for experiment
bjbjnjnk chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
this is haunting

i'm not entirely sure if you were using metaphors (i do so hope this isn't literal and real... uhm)

or just creating a scene of dehumanization,

but either way, it was a very well-written, somewhat creepy (not in a bad way, though) poem and i love the way it was put together