Reviews for Suicide
fallenshadow42 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
this is good, i like it. i can relate to the character, and the writing has a sorta poetic feel it it. good job.
thisismeCRAZY chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
this is good, i can really relate to how the character feels and why she just doesn't want to carry on living. in order to improve this, you might want to write another chapter about why, why she feels as she does, why she was driven to trying to kill herself and why it led to the events in this chapter?...
Vylette Skye chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
LOVE it
She'sALady-SoTreatHerLikeOne chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
It wasn't that descriptive...But it felt real...Are you going to continue this as a story?