|Reviews for nagaina|
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
two points i'd like to mention unrelated to the creepy:
1: "sucking" poison out doesn't actually do anything and will probably just make it worse because ew, your mouth festering breeding ground of bacteria
2: it's funny 'cause a lot of your recent poetry is metaphors similes
(but don't worry, they're not the stupid "the clock was as ugly as yo mom" similes or the "the clock /was/ yo mom" metaphors
they are very good similes and very good metaphors okay?)
anyway yeah lol it's midnight and i am a dumbass reviewer this was nice i liked it very much.