It was pretty nice! w

Although I didn't read the original story, I bet this one was better.

It was very suspenseful! With the question if Honey and Oliver 'did' anything. Owo

And her and her mom getting into fights, that made me shed a tear because I know that feeling all too well. .

It was nice to hear her having a nice step dad though. v You don't get many of those.

And I also liked the characteristics of Honeys brothers, hehe, reminds me of my brother. v

Anyway, pretty nice story, hope to see some more!
- James. X