Reviews for Old Man Jack
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
This is a charming and imaginative piece- who would have thought of a snow man's point of view! It's sad too- poor ice man- imobile.
RandomUser674 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I love the Scottishness of this. The vocabulary is so much more interesting than the words I'm used to. Is there any reason you bold all your poems?
Psychedelic Dreams chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
This was quite interesting. I initially had the idea that the female was his wife. But as I read on, I realised that she was more likely to be his grandchild. Still stuck between deciding that the image of the girl was just a hallucination or reality. But I guess it's up to the reader to decide. Slightly lonely feel to this poem but it adds to its charm. Not bad.