|Reviews for Save Me|
| iZinnia chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I'd like to know more about this story. It's pretty sad, I think.
Anyway, you used so many swear words. Maybe some is enough. I don't think you need that many. Just my recommendation, though.
| Ketasch chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Hey. I really would like to hear more from this piece! What happens to Rin? There are a couple of little spelling errors but those are easy fixed by running your piece through spellcheck on word first before publishing. Some of the more noticable ones though are 'furry' (She didn't want to look into those beautiful hazel eyes and see face the furry in them) Fury has one 'r'.
But it is a really strong piece of writing. I would like to read more about Rin! Is she ok? What's wrong with her? Or more what does she think is wrong with her?