Reviews for I can't think
Sepulchred chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
It's like you picked my mind apart before you wrote this. I love it, relate to it, especially now, and have trouble thinking of this as a poem. This doesn't count as a returned review, by the way, because I'd already read it and was planning to review anyway.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
This was a very enjoyable read. I love all of the personal touches you have here especially the image of the "panicked mouse". I think downtrod should be 'downtrodden' but it reads very nicely.

Keep writing!
William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
funny how thoughts an ideas allude you when you need them most. This is the bane of all writers. Your imagery in this piece creates an almost desperate feel, wanting and striving for the thoughts to return yet knowing they seldom do. Brava!

-William