Reviews for 18th Floor Balcony
starry3y3dangel chapter 3 . 11/29/2012
Just re-read the prologue and the chapters that you have posted there and i absolutely love it! I can't wait to read the published one :)
starry3y3dangel chapter 2 . 4/2/2012
Please pm me once the story is available. I can't wait to read it again! :) best of luck to you! :D
joonmonjagi chapter 2 . 2/1/2012
Good luck on publishing! I can't wait to read it and buy it if I can. You're a truly gifted an amazing writer :)
starry3y3dangel chapter 8 . 1/26/2012
Good luck on publishing your story ) It is definitely one of the stories that I really loved.

Can't wait to read the edited version!
fturner chapter 8 . 1/26/2012
Good Luck with your publishing. I have certainly enjoyed reading your story (it is one of my favourites) and can't wait to read the published version.
DreamBigGoFar23 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Great story from beginning to end, and I loved that they stayed together and supported each other since the moment they got together. Very strong-willed characters and the fact that they didnt let anyone break them up was amazing because usually in other stories they make the characters temporarily turn against each other, etc... Other than that, good luck on your publication and best wishes!
EmmieEms313 chapter 8 . 1/26/2012
Good luck. Please PM me when the story is published. I would love to read the revision. Much love.
Hello world chapter 30 . 1/10/2012
I want a story for Jonah! I would find that interesting and to hear what happens to the rest of the family!
Reggie Rodgers chapter 30 . 12/29/2011
This was wonderful. You should feel very proud of yourself for this unique, purely original story. The characters were all believable. You described everything so well, especially with all the drama betweeen families. My hat off to you and your wonderful writing abilities.
Brightheart chapter 30 . 12/23/2011
amazing story. loved it.
lilac.jasmine chapter 30 . 12/18/2011
So sad to see the end of this but really really happy with the ending! 3 Loved the story from beginning to end! :)
joonmonjagi chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Kristoffer and Max, but mostly and ESPECIALLY Kristoffer would be GREAT characters for a sequel. I actually had a dream last night where Kristoffer met a girl who danced and it was almost like Rory and Erik's sex life sort of because when Kristoffer tried to touch her like that, she had a past where her father actually raped her. I don't know, maybe it's just my brain trying to mentally create a sequel since there isn't a real one. Anyway, you did an AMAAZZZING job on this and I loved reading it. I couldn't put it down for anything. Keep up the work ;)
jennibeans chapter 30 . 12/17/2011
i read this all within a few hours and i just wanted to let you know that it was exactly what i've been looking for. so, thank you & well done!
witeaya chapter 30 . 12/17/2011
i enjoyed reading the story.

the characters' were well-developed.

just one complaint; i dont think the title reflect the story at its a tiny bit relevant bc of erik 18th floor apartment but thats where it ends.
zoba20 chapter 30 . 12/17/2011
omg i so loved this story, i can't wait for the sequel with kristoffer but i was hoping u would have a sequel for erik and rory. a contrinuation of their lives
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