Reviews for Puppet on a string
lamourlibre chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
This is fantastic work.

The last line came as a surprise to me, so it really added to the emotional power of the poem.

"You can choke me around my neck / With my own strings and I wouldn't mind."

Those lines yield so much power. Good work! Keep writing, and I can only wish that you'll always have the power to cut the strings when anyone tries to control you.