Reviews for pretty bird, silly bird
Punslinger chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I am impressed by the way you find emotional release in poetry, and pleased that you share it with us. You really drew me in by giving a commonplace event such vivid description and depth of feeling.
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Wow. Just adore this poem. The off-rhyme with;

"and when she quietly stopped breathing

tiny feathered heart stopped beating,"

was especially nice.

This is a gorgeous analogy, really lovely use of language. It was a nice fresh take. Keep up the brilliant work :)