Reviews for VL3 - Nightmare City
Unhappy Feet chapter 19 . 2/29/2012
I was wrong, you're not a gem, you're a sparkling 12 karat diamond set in platinum! Thank you for this swift update!

Ohh, dum dum dum ... Cliffhangers are so much fun (so long as they happen to someone else, of course)

Keep up the good work
Unhappy Feet chapter 18 . 2/25/2012
Ahhh, my goodness! Three chapters? You're an absolute gem!

I just love the way things are developing now. But even more than that, I love the cute little interactions between Evie and Gabriel. They're ADORABLE when they fight!

Keep it up, dear!
Soothsayer35 chapter 18 . 2/25/2012
Poor Evangeline; such a welter of confusing emotions toward Gabriel - the adult "normal" Gabriel and the now-Gabriel (munchkin-sized and then teenage-Gabriel) seems to be sending her for a loop.

Add in shepherding teenage-Gabriel around her old stomping grounds where her past lover lives and it's sure to be an exciting next chapter.
World Of Ink chapter 18 . 2/24/2012
I love the new Gabriel he's so adorable. It kinda sucks Angie had to meet her dad the way she did and I hope they figure out what happened to Lucien.

I was glad to see you had time to update and that there were three chapters. Only one thing, sometimes it gets kind of confusing when you change perspectives. Is there any way you can format so that the reader knows we're changing from Angie to Gabriel. Maybe try putting in a page break or something?

Otherwise great job and keep up the good work.
The Red Dove chapter 15 . 2/9/2012
Whoa! I thought you were done after the first two, for some reason, when I finished the second one in the summer. One day, I come to see if you've written anything more and BANG!

More Vampire awesomeness!

Please continue, I love this series!
Unhappy Feet chapter 15 . 2/4/2012
Riveting as always. Finally, Katrina makes her appearance! On to the next one please!
Green Sea Blossom chapter 15 . 1/21/2012
I love it so far! Can't wait for the update!
The Maple Leaf chapter 15 . 1/17/2012
They finally meet again! I was so happy when I read this chapter! Now, when is Gabriel going to be an adult again? :)
Unhappy Feet chapter 13 . 1/15/2012
Begging is not a pretty thing, but I'll happily do so if it will make you update any sooner:

Oh please, dearest author, do not leave us waiting in agony much longer! I, for one, shall surely fall into dispair if I don't get a fresh fix of Gabriel and Angie soon. (It may sound like I'm exaggerating, but really, I'm not - this story and its predecessors are THAT good.)
Soothsayer35 chapter 13 . 12/12/2011
Quite an interesting twist with Gabriel's regeneration due to amniotic fluids, but into a MUCH younger body. I did enjoy it greatly and am looking forward to him regaining his memories (and aging a bit so it's not weird for him and Evangeline to get together), then unraveling the whole Katrina mystery.
World Of Ink chapter 13 . 12/11/2011
I hope that he remembers Angie soon and I'm hoping that Angie finds him. I'm glad that he's regained consciousness.

I was happy to see you had updated and that it was two chapters and not just one. Update soon!
The Maple Leaf chapter 11 . 11/6/2011
I will say this again because I do not understand why your stories do not have more reviews; this is by FAR the best vampire series I have read on here ever! You are so very talented and deserve way more attention than what you are getting! I am so sick of "Twilight" rip offs and nothing original that your writing is always re-freshing.

Another awesome, gripping chapter! Well written, and the emotion felt by Angie really got to my heart! I hope she finds Gabriel soon! Thank you for sharing these amazing stories!
World Of Ink chapter 11 . 11/6/2011
I wonder how Angie will take it when she finds out the hunter was her dad. Desrye's story was interesting and I hope Gabriel will be back to his normal self soon.
World Of Ink chapter 10 . 10/21/2011
I'm glad Gabriel will be okay. I wonder what's the deal with Desyre and Gabriel. Update soon!
World Of Ink chapter 9 . 10/18/2011
This is the best vampire story I have ever read. It's so well written. I love how Angie and Gabriel's relationship has developed. I hope she gets to him in time enough to save him.

It looks to me like every time Gabriel suffers through a traumatic experience, he loses his memory, like when he was locked away in the coffin for fifty years, and now after being held hostage and burned by the sun, but it's only a guess.

Good job and keep writing. I can't wait until the next installment
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