Reviews for Picture
skersey chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
This is very powerful. It would be riveting if performed on a stage! My FAVORITE line: "How black and white are trying to destroy/The grey bridge between them" because it's so true! People don't appreciate primary and secondary colors like they used to (although that too is debatable)

I love the idea of taking pictures with this, and I love how short each line is so that really forces emphasis on the reader. It's bleak, but it's how a lot of people feel nowadays, so it's also a timely piece

Keep writing!