Reviews for Book 1: Attachments Chapter 9: Honor thy Father
disrhythmic chapter 5 . 9/19/2011
-flails- OH MY GOD. Way to end on a cliffhanger, yeesh! :P Suspense aside, I really loved this one. The way you give the character's backstory a little bit at a time is awesome and, of course, I'm absolutely hooked. :D
disrhythmic chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
Aww, poor Naomi. :( She's all on her own and Joseph's out of it for a while... Insanely convoluted and heartpounding as always - loved it! :D
disrhythmic chapter 3 . 9/10/2011
Aw, poor Naomi. :( At least she has Joey to be all badass and save her. :P Awesome as usual - the twists! Dear god, the TWISTS! XD Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
disrhythmic chapter 2 . 9/10/2011
I love Kyrie so much. XD "Um…last time I went on the field with you, I got kidnapped. And then I got kidnapped again." Beautiful. XD

So Naomi's running through the forest, Jane's deteriorating, Kyrie's snarking it up as usual, Frederic's in turmoil, and little soldier boy is going to wake up extremely confused. XD
disrhythmic chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
DUN DUN! Holy crap, that's intense. XD I love the emotional conflict, as always. Really well done. :D