|Reviews for Chronicles of the Terran's: Magic|
| Raven Starhawk chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
For me this chapter makes a excellent addition but I see you have many more chapters I haven't had the pleasure of reading yet so here I go!
| Swallow-tailed Kite chapter 5 . 10/7/2011
yep, good story. It's still the same person as below.
great job, but do edit all those small mistakes next time :)
| Kaylio chapter 2 . 10/7/2011
Hey, still continuing. Is is okay if u could just put the thought speaking in italics? Otherwise it's a bit tough trying to figure out which is narration and which is thought speaking.
| Kaylio chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Olla, I'm too lazy to log in, but u can pm me at Kaylio. Anyway, nice story so far, so don't lose heart and discontinue it. Then, those people that had never read tis would miss so much. Careful about those minor mistakes though, but yeah,