Reviews for Creepypasta
No. 767 chapter 13 . 12/4/2011
This story is totally rad! I hope you might make more stories about this fabulous nut sometime!
RedX9 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
the first part wasn't really established. I really don't understand what's really going on until I read the whole story. The part where this man suddenly comes up to the main and yells profanities, at first I really don't get what's going on, but it was until the end when I realised that it was the neighbour. That part, too many assumptions were made. How did the angry person immediately know that the main woke him up dead in the night and why must the main apologize to him, he should at least know who he is dealing with

"The hell I know, they never told me although I heard that there's a lady screaming in the inn las...wait, that was you?" This sentence was just weird to me. So the main character is a she and she lives in the inn? That must be sarcasm I sure of it

When he saw the alleged ghost and you ended it off with the scream, it just felt weird. Maybe some reactions to it. You can't be screaming and then you do nothing about it, maybe make him check his surroundings first.

-RED-