|Reviews for Stars|
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
I love this one. Especially the beginning and the end. "Feeling lost in a sea of eyes" - beautiful. "Hold me safe in your arms - Away from the nightmares - Never let go…" OMG. Brilliant.
I'm not sure if I'd repeat the chorus so often, but if this were played, I'm sure it'd sound amazing. I'd love to listen to this sung :)
Only a few spelling things - "your" in the chorus should be "you're", and "skys" should be "skies" - but you don't hear spelling mistakes anyways, so don't worry about it _
Overall, great job! Keep writing :)
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I've never read a song like this before
AMAZING...FANTASTIC job :)
| professional griefer chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
This is great! You probably don't want advice, but I'd start it in Am if you don't have a key yet.