Reviews for What Hearlds In The Night
this-is-silence chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Haha YES!

I love poems like this. I really like suspense/thriller horror poems and I feel like there are too few.

I really got into it at the lines-A burglar/Or the Cat

Oh goodness and the last two lines are phenomenal. Or really, the last four lines.

This might honestly be my favorite of yours.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Clever because every kid at some point has been afraid of the dark and the monster hiding under his bed! :-) I like it because it's simple but the last line gave me the creeps, in a good way, because now you think what is out there in the dark?

Nice, I'm fave-ing right ...now-ish.
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Nice

Really... who wasn't afraid of the darkness/night at some point? Pictured that fear pretty well
The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
not your best poem, but still enjoyable

and otally relatable, because what child wasn't afraid of the dark

the flow id a bit off, because your lines vary in length so much, thats what I would try to change if it were mine and edited it again

keep writing!
lymli chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
the thing bout a someone weird coming into you at night is kinda scary :) cool piece.
fairypen chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
good one indeed; it's like you told a whole story in those few lines, I couldn't help but get the meaning of it..to me it was something like those old tales of the hiding boogies that grannys usually told us when we were kids...I really really liked it.

Nice job.

Again, plz PM me when you write a new one :)