|Reviews for No reality|
| Undiscovered-Creations chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I didn't think this poem was confusing. I think it tied itself together well. A fading dream: something I'm all too familiar with, but hope is out there.
This was a great poem. I liked this one a lot.
| uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
This. Yes, this. Was amazing. The imagery is just perfect for the story. I must admit I particularly loved this stanza:
"Slowly he would play
Taunt each chord out
No matter how much they seemed over played
A melody would always come lose
The reminisce of broken emptiness dragging along
His melody bittersweet coming undone
As day by day
He came to realize"
That's exactly how it is for me and my drawing. I can go so, so long, and I'll put it off, but when I finally pick up a pen and the first strokes are down on paper. A whole picture comes alive and I didn't even have to think about it. )
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I just want to wrap that man in a hug and tell him everything is going to be ok! It's sad he never lived out his dreams like he wanted and how he hoped he would. I can't help thinking I walked past someone like this...didn't listen and just too busy in my own world to notice but I will now. I hope I see that guy strumming day by day with his gorgeous talent...Just hope my dreams don't get washed away
Simply beautiful and yet heartbreakingly sad...
| Eleantris chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
This is amazing; the poem tells the story so beautifully. Who is it about?