Reviews for No reality
Undiscovered-Creations chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I didn't think this poem was confusing. I think it tied itself together well. A fading dream: something I'm all too familiar with, but hope is out there.

This was a great poem. I liked this one a lot.
uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
This. Yes, this. Was amazing. The imagery is just perfect for the story. I must admit I particularly loved this stanza:

"Slowly he would play

Taunt each chord out

No matter how much they seemed over played

A melody would always come lose

The reminisce of broken emptiness dragging along

His melody bittersweet coming undone

As day by day

He came to realize"

That's exactly how it is for me and my drawing. I can go so, so long, and I'll put it off, but when I finally pick up a pen and the first strokes are down on paper. A whole picture comes alive and I didn't even have to think about it. )

BrittBritt
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I just want to wrap that man in a hug and tell him everything is going to be ok! It's sad he never lived out his dreams like he wanted and how he hoped he would. I can't help thinking I walked past someone like this...didn't listen and just too busy in my own world to notice but I will now. I hope I see that guy strumming day by day with his gorgeous talent...Just hope my dreams don't get washed away

Simply beautiful and yet heartbreakingly sad...
Eleantris chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
This is amazing; the poem tells the story so beautifully. Who is it about?

X D