Reviews for We could work on art no one can compose
tolerate chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Beautiful! Your friend sure is lucky!
8U88LY chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
A pleasently sweet and cute poem :)
Archia chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Very nice, I really liked how the rhyme was just slightly obvious, but not to obvious to make it seem tacky. "We could work on art no one can compose, And nurture a seed into a blue rose." Those two lines made me really smile.
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Absolutely beautiful. I love the rhyme scheme - I've never seen one like this before. I love the imagery too. Well done :)
Speed of Sound chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
really good, very touching, you must care a lot about your friend, and i hope you both find eachother again! ) Great poem!