|Reviews for Four Haiku|
| codes and keys chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
simply wonderful. i love "bones" and how you used "skeletons in the closet".
| The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I'm a little disturbed... but in a good way
I hope you are talking about nail polish, because otherwise I don't get it
Man, now I want some cake
you captured the feeling of want perfectly
seems a little dark, almost like she's starving herself
this one is my favorite
but I want a backstory, or maye a full blown poem about this haiku, i think it could work, because you start us at the edge of a cliff, and show us how long it took for that girl (i assumed it was a girl and her boyfriend is what got her their)to get there
feeling a mice vibe...
more anorexia vive here, and maybe some abuse
Overall, I mght just be reading too deep, but this is definately mor like rated T then K... anyway good job, and I would expand each of them into thier own poem, or story... whicheer you prefer
| disrhythmic chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Just wonderful. :) I love 'bones' in particular. :)