Hey!
This is CoffeeArtist from Wattpad, and I read this story there itself.
OMG! This is the best thing ever! I've got a hangover of the book now! I feel empty, now that it has finished (i know I'm being extremely dramatic, but it's true!) and I am really hoping for a sequel. I know, it's fine if you don't write a sequel for the sake of the storyline, but I would be very glad if you do. Even a one-shot or so would be fine.
Honestly, I was uncertain if I should read a mafia story or what, but the second chapter got me hooked. I couldn't stop laughing the entire time! Vincent and Ivan are my favorite! I can never get enough of the two! And of course, how can we forget the 'GOLDEN TRIO' (Joon, Bridgett, and Andy)?
Angelica was another story altogether. I love how protective she was for Sony. Anddd Jagger. I really wanted him to have a soft spot for Sony, and when he did, I couldn't feel more relieved.
Matty was like a cartoon (no offense, saying that coz he was humorous) and I liked his changing temper. Bomb Loan, was one of them whom I adored, and I couldn't stop laughing like a maniac with his mom complex!
Paul seemed like a side-chara to me initially, but he thankfully got better. And again, Ivan was totally interesting, and Vincent! Aww, boy! He seemed so innocent throughout that I couldn't believe he was villainous before meeting Sony. :)
Last but not the least, Sony Parker. She was timid and a bit serious (i thought so) but you extracted the best out of the character. Especially when the harem begins.
The sole thought of these people not existing in real world made me cry. I wish there were more books like this.
And that's it! I hope you come up with such story again. Best wishes!
Diamond Shyn

i love it

omg this was so funny i just had to review before i finished the story. Best idea ever lol

yes you can you can tollatly hate your mom

awwwwwwww

The ending sucked!
It looks like shes a slut!

LMAO!#%! i loved that! And tanged! But in a way that makes bentley the one she ends with, which is just :s!

I just want it to be Ivan or Jagger. My favs 3

NOOO that is just animal cruelty!

AWWWWW!

This...should be an anime. It would be so frisking epic

maybe some people may not like this cause it seems too unrealistic but you know why i love it so much cause it's a shojo MANGAS idk if this was based on a mangas you read or it's your creation but i like your writing and the story is familiar more like the characters are like other mangas characters

Omg I read your story on wattpad to lol love your story!

I am so happy I decided to read this story! I love all of the characters and im glad you stopped were you did I dont think I could see any of them get regected :( (exept for jagger some thing about him just does not stick right with me...maybe because he tried to kill her...) Oh and matty reminds me of willy wonka...just a little bit more messed up XD

I think your story is pretty cool. I'm going to read more now.