Reviews for a rhyme
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
This rhyme in this is kind of charming despite the sad subject of the poem. I really liked how simple it was, it said a lot in only a few word. Great job.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
That is sad, but well said. I like that you took a rhyming poem and made it mature. Nicely done. Keep writing! :)
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Amazing rhyme sad and well...sad poem

But a brilliant one too

That's going on my favorites
listen to what i've never said chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
great :) I see you've been working on the rhymes ;D