Reviews for The Wicked Beasts That Roam
Sucka4fiya chapter 32 . 9/9/2012
See with a girl hes going to be a sucka dor her
dreamercrys chapter 33 . 8/28/2012
Loved it!
MorganaTheWitch chapter 33 . 8/24/2012
Oh my, I'm so glad that my comment made a difference! And I can't tell you how thrilled I got when I saw that you'd uploaded the rest of the story! I almost fainted at the spot, haha. I really like this piece and I can't wait to read your upgraded version! The only things I could think of as suggestions should be to make the apocalypse more central, it didn't seem like a big deal at all here, LOL! And then the last chapter felt a bit rushed (but I'm guessing you know that and are going to make it more slow paced in your updated version). The only thing I'd want is more sexy time with Dom and Jade. Oh yes, I said it! I love your love-scenes, they are intense and vivid. So don't feel the need to spare them, mohaha!
Okay, I'm gonna stop rambling over here. So; this was an awesome story all together, even if it's your rough draft. I can't wait to read the polished version. Keep writing, you are very talented! :)
RomanceObsessed chapter 33 . 8/20/2012
The ending of this story did need some revision but it was still good. I'm going to read the revised chapters now.
Hayley Jade Alisdair chapter 32 . 8/20/2012
Naaw... That's so cute :) is there more?
Hayley Jade Alisdair chapter 31 . 8/20/2012
What has Dom not told Jade...
Ney13 chapter 33 . 8/20/2012
YESSS! Thank you for clearing this up:)
Marilyn a.k.a Wolfshifter chapter 32 . 8/20/2012
Awww they had a baby together! Love this story and I'm going to re-read it again!
meeska chapter 32 . 8/20/2012
That cant be the end
Ney13 chapter 32 . 8/20/2012
Wait, what? What happened with Pierce? What about God, his grandfather? Dom's issues with his dad? Erika's issues with Dom? What was Dom talking about in his phone call last chapter?
Epilogue? I didn't even know the story was finished, it seems like there is so much more that you need to add.
Ney13 chapter 31 . 8/20/2012
:) That's all I have to say
The Phoenix Girl chapter 30 . 8/20/2012
Nice! Dom pouting and feeling violated! never expected that! :)
Great work :)
Hayley Jade Alisdair chapter 30 . 8/20/2012
So many chapters in so little time you are an awesome author. Well, plus the fact that this story is brilliant! Looking forward to your next update. Oh, and I was wondering if you could recommend any stories that follow somewhat similar lines to your own?
The Phoenix Girl chapter 29 . 8/20/2012
Aw how sweet!
Great work :)
The Phoenix Girl chapter 28 . 8/20/2012
Awww! he finally said it! :D
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