Reviews for Heartless
bookppl93 chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
Can u please update?
Aria-dancingdolphins15 chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Hey I got my account! I just wanted to let you know. Sorry I haven't read your story yet but since I know you I'm sure it's great. I have read the old version but not this version just yet. Look at my favorites and read this poem called

Drifting it's good I think that u will like it. :) ttyl
violetfireflies chapter 3 . 10/4/2011
I love this! It's so cute and Ace sounds so dreamy... :D Haha! You are a really good writer. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
violetfireflies chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
YAY! Too cute! I'm just gonna read the next chapter now. :D
violetfireflies from FF chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Hey! It's me, violetfireflies from FanFiction, a.k.a. swingdancer23's friend. You know me. ;) Haha! That sounded creepy, but you do. Anyway, I have read this before so I kind of know what happens unless of course you changed the plot. I loved it and I still love it! It's so creative. I'm going to read the next chapter now. :D
MyManIsFictional chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
I'm interested to see what happens when she goes outside.
swingdancer23 chapter 2 . 9/15/2011
Yay! *Happy dance*

I love the creativity in this story; it's so cool! And to think this was all inspired by a dream...Wow.

Only one thing - you have one misspelling from when you changed that part - "definitely", you spelled it "defiantly". That's it! If you need help changing it, let me know :)

Can't wait for the next chapter :)
MyManIsFictional chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Ooh, this is definitely interesting. It's well written and I like the idea. I look forward to reading more
swingdancer23 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
YAY! Awesome job, girl :) I'll spread word of your story right away :) You might want to enable anonymous reviews, since my audience will be coming from FanFiction and would have to create another account to review your story.

But Oml. Your story is so creative and unique; I can't wait until you post the next chapters :)