|Reviews for Feasible or Unsustainable|
| AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Brilliant, as always. YOU ARE AMAZING! I loved the words you used to make it so amazing and how you made it flow and every line fitted together like a puzzle. Brilliant!
| Undiscovered-Creations chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
This was a truly unique poem.
I loved this one.
It reminds me of a maze almost. In a darker setting, maybe just before dusk.
| uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I like this one immensely. )
You wrote the words so that they came across quite interestingly.
The only thing I would suggest changing is this set of words:
"But you haven't even fallen cold
Nothing has hit you
Except that cold air
Blocking you out cold
Without the heat"
All the "colds" are a little repetitive. Maybe if you said "frigid air" instead, it would divide it up a bit.
That was the only thing that stood out to me. Other than that I loved it!
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
I don't know whether to cheer or cry...is the person who defy the odds ok? This is so sad yet true because people do that. I love your use of words and I think this so relates to me right now! Just amazing...it really is
Gonna favourite right now...
| Eleantris chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
I love this. The wording really put across the spirit of the poem, and it spoke to me. Brilliant work!