good story!

The German for "the sun is shining" is actually spelled "die Sonne scheint" and the command form of kommen is just komm also the german for "we" is wir (wie means "how".) if you don't know german well enough, you should really use a translation site or just eliminate it from the story altogether as it just feels really out of place in most of the spots you use it in. (I'm in German 5-6, so I don't know it very well either, i'm just a grammar nazi in every language aren't I .")

Other than that, I'm really enjoying the story so far, good job :) I really want to know what happened to Scarlet's dad's angel! The first thing I wondered when Roy saved Scarlet was why her dad wasn't saved too, lol.

and now for some (probably bad because it's all out of my head and i'm tired) german: ach Gott, Sie werden dies nicht lesen. Es ist Jahre alt. Lesen Sie diese Dinge noch? Warum schreibe ich es? Leute wird es nicht lesen... Ich sagte "lesen" viel da...

It was kind great story...i love but hmmm as in story where are third and 4th G.A who fight with enemy and another protect his love...what about jun warning to her no to fall in love with Roy? And it was easily Roy and Scarlet fall in love ? I want some more teasing fun...like he say scar is his gf in whole class...hehe oh yes i must pick..that in which Roy say to scar - something like i still going to have luna? Haha it made me good love. BUT unless and untill Roy and Scarlet happy together in end..I love it ! Just i pick some stupid thing..dont mind. Oh yeah Jun i would love him with scarlet so sorry hehe

Amazing story.

WHat an ending...a twist at that.

This is a really good story, it was entirely entertaining from start to finish!

i really enjoyed this! is ther going to be more or is this the last of this book, will there be a sequel?! UPDATE! such a unique story i loved how scarlet named them haha.

I do love this story. I wish you would write more to the story it's very interesting.

This is where I die laughing from imagining Jun and Roy flirting.

Lala-I am so sad to see this story end-I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED IT and cannot believe it is done! Great job writing it and I think I prefer this ending much better myself! Looking for more from you WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL JOB!

Really? This is the ending? What about the prophesy? What about the others? What about Roy's and Scarlet's relantionship! I'm sorry but nothing really seemed to happen in this story. C'mon where's the action? I'm sorry but the ending was really a let down.

This was a pretty cool story. u should make a one-shot on that time when scarlet had a crush on Oliver and Roy had a crush on Jun. that'd b really funny and interesting to read

Damn!

Awwww human Luna would've been for Oliver since guardian angel Luna is supposed to be for Jun... Awwww i got chills. Anyway the three of them would've still been friends, right, just with the addition of the human Luna? Anywayy, please please please update soon! :)

I love this story! Good plot here. :) 3 keep it up!