|Reviews for lucy's|
| smoke another grin chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
this is striking. the words, the images they create, the relationship they describe - fascinating. well done.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I love this kind of poem. It's so raw and bitter and young, if that makes sense. I can't relate to any of it, not really, and maybe that's why I love it. It's a different world. I hope it's not a true story, but it makes for beautiful poetry, anyway, as masochistic as that seems. Keep writing! :)