| Reviews for Never Unintentional |
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   kaymonkeygirl chapter 8 . 9/18/2011 Short but great:) update soon? |
| Atramento chapter 7 . 9/15/2011 Typo Alert 2: 'to see John s something' should be 'to see John as something' Just because. Oh and John is a *~% jerk. I hate two-timing cheaters. |
| Atramento chapter 6 . 9/15/2011 Typo Alert: 'I turned over t Jonathan' should be 'I turned over to Jonathan.' Just because I thought you should know. X) Too bad Joe didn't recognize her. Drat. |
| Atramento chapter 5 . 9/15/2011 What's the bet her new brother is Joe? [rueful smile] |
| Atramento chapter 4 . 9/15/2011 It's not a bad story, even if it is a bit short. If you wanted to make it better all you'd have to do is add more detail and more scenes. But if you don't want to don't worry. This story almost reminds me of something I saw on YouTube: 'Sims 2 Love Story A Real Teen Love Story [high quality] ' |
| Atramento chapter 3 . 9/15/2011 "Why have I ever done to you?" Did you mean "What have I ever done to you?" Joe is a bit of a jerk...but I'm sure it will all work out eventually. X) Nice chapter. |
| Atramento chapter 2 . 9/15/2011 Dang that sucks. Joe don't relise how lucky he is. :) |
| Atramento chapter 1 . 9/15/2011 Nice so far. It sucks how boys can act like jerks that way. Anyway, I'll keep reading. X) |
| kaymonkeygirl chapter 6 . 9/13/2011 :) loved it |