Reviews for Better Late Than Never
Du chapter 34 . 12/30/2015
I am back (me being the same person as the previous review). This story is so beautiful all the way through. I couldn't help but reread it. It's so wonderfully written, the there is nothing rushed... I especially like how you drew out the last part of the story, it taking Gideon so long to figure it out and then Nola requiring quite some persuasion to actually believe him. Gah, I love this story so much!
Happy holidays :)
Du chapter 35 . 10/10/2015
I stumbled across this story two days ago, and am very pleased I decided to read it. It's beautiful. It's so well written... I felt for Nola and I felt for Gideon. I felt all the emotions they did. I can't even begin to try and convey what this story has meant to me. Just, thank you so much for writing this. It hit close to home. And... I don't know what else to say. I more than loved it, and I promise I will read it again. Several times. I mean it. It's brilliant. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I wish you the best in whatever your life brings you.
ajashire1 chapter 35 . 6/9/2015
You will never understand how much I adored this story. In fact I'm not even sure it can be put into words, but then again I've always been one for challenges.

This story was beautiful in every way humanly possible. I cried, smiled, laughed and yelled with (and at) your characters and honestly when I go into stories like this that's all I ever ask for. You gave 10 times that.
Thank you so very much for writing such a lovely story. It was a great read.

Kayla159 chapter 35 . 4/12/2015
Great story, couldn't stop reading.
Dbnichols chapter 35 . 1/15/2015
I love this story. I've read it 4 times, if not more. You are a fantastic writer.
Dbnichols chapter 29 . 1/14/2015
Someone needs to smack Gideon upside the head. Wonderful chapter
Dbnichols chapter 27 . 1/14/2015
I need more tissues. My heart breaks for her. Fantastic chapter
Dbnichols chapter 18 . 1/13/2015
He really is a jerk.
Dbnichols chapter 4 . 1/13/2015
Dbnichols chapter 2 . 1/13/2015
Great chapter
Guest chapter 35 . 11/15/2014
Such a great story! I've been reading it in my spare time over the past couple weeks and I'm so sad that it's over. You're a wonderful writer, and it had such an amazing ending.
foxyricanlady chapter 34 . 10/27/2014
I love this story so much I keep coming back to 're read it. Have you thought about publishing it?
Guest chapter 35 . 7/17/2014
The best story I have read so far on this fan fiction site. Thank you so much for sharing your talent
Grespitchied chapter 35 . 7/18/2014
The last few chapters of this story just made me grin like a little girl in a chocolate store! I honestly didn't like how in the beginning of the story it barely covered their childhood years. Seeing as the plot discussed her admiration for him at different ages, I though it would have gone through those simple innocent emotions and how it would develop into the more sane love, but I was so drawn to the characters that I couldn't stop reading.

After their first time together I was asking 'so they did it- end of story' BUT ohhhhh that was apparently just the beginning. I didn't expect the development to be like that! Gideon really had the decent man whore thing down and Nola was so strong throughout it all. After declaring her love I thought she'd be a bitch about it but she was mature enough to recognize her mistakes. It was a big relief that the supporting characters allowed. Gideon to come to his senses alone, except for the little push here or there. Everything in the story was just irrationally rational - if that makes sense - that I wasn't annoyed or dismayed by the attitude of the characters because the way you wrote them just made perfect sense.

The big declaration gesture wasn't too cheesy and I liked how they didn't run into each other's arms and kiss. It was also super sweet how Liam ties in with the story. And this last chapter where it reminisces about the first time he unknowingly declared his love for her, however bashful the circumstances may be, it was a good way to end the story. A touch of sweet, a touch of humor, a touch of crass and a whole lot of lovin!
Guest chapter 35 . 5/11/2014
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