Great story, couldn't stop reading.

I love this story. I've read it 4 times, if not more. You are a fantastic writer.

Someone needs to smack Gideon upside the head. Wonderful chapter

I need more tissues. My heart breaks for her. Fantastic chapter

He really is a jerk.

WOW!

Great chapter

Such a great story! I've been reading it in my spare time over the past couple weeks and I'm so sad that it's over. You're a wonderful writer, and it had such an amazing ending.

I love this story so much I keep coming back to 're read it. Have you thought about publishing it?

The best story I have read so far on this fan fiction site. Thank you so much for sharing your talent

The last few chapters of this story just made me grin like a little girl in a chocolate store! I honestly didn't like how in the beginning of the story it barely covered their childhood years. Seeing as the plot discussed her admiration for him at different ages, I though it would have gone through those simple innocent emotions and how it would develop into the more sane love, but I was so drawn to the characters that I couldn't stop reading.

After their first time together I was asking 'so they did it- end of story' BUT ohhhhh that was apparently just the beginning. I didn't expect the development to be like that! Gideon really had the decent man whore thing down and Nola was so strong throughout it all. After declaring her love I thought she'd be a bitch about it but she was mature enough to recognize her mistakes. It was a big relief that the supporting characters allowed. Gideon to come to his senses alone, except for the little push here or there. Everything in the story was just irrationally rational - if that makes sense - that I wasn't annoyed or dismayed by the attitude of the characters because the way you wrote them just made perfect sense.

The big declaration gesture wasn't too cheesy and I liked how they didn't run into each other's arms and kiss. It was also super sweet how Liam ties in with the story. And this last chapter where it reminisces about the first time he unknowingly declared his love for her, however bashful the circumstances may be, it was a good way to end the story. A touch of sweet, a touch of humor, a touch of crass and a whole lot of lovin!

AWESOME!

Sweet epilogue. I loved that the bar was betting on their relationship, marriage and babies! LOL! I hope they don't have Irish twins! Ha!

I really enjoyed your story. It was entertaining, filled with drama and romance. Thank you for writing!

Most definitely! Better late than never! I loved this chapter! Gideon was amazing and I loved how Mama J and Mr Q were there too.

Nothing like realizing what you could lose to wake you up.