|Reviews for Safety first,|
| True Talker chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I will just say that it makes me think. I will also say that when it comes to personal fear and personal pain, I won't comment good or not because how can you say you do or don't like someone's pain.
I wil only tell you this; my wish for you is good and positive things now and in the future.
| Eden Green chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Excellent piece of work here. I especially loved the following lines.
I can't get hurt again; I have to resist
handing you the only gun that can put
a hole in my heart.
You would use it correctly, and completely
by accident. I may even wrap my hand around
yours to help you pull the trigger.
Seriously, well done!
| doe heart chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I love the imagery in this so much.
| Sepulchred chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I read it this morning, and was thinking for the most part of the day (okay, only when I remembered) about something clever and witty and insightful to say. I don't have anything, so you'll have to settle with an 'I lovelovelove this.', or maybe an 'I think this is awesome/brilliant/genius/wonderfully phrased.'. Oh well.
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Vague beginning, powerful finish