Reviews for Taken
CorkyBookworm1 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
I liked this one. It almost seemed to jump out at me as if taunting me. You know, like that game you always played as a little kid "nan na nan na boo boo you can't catch me". It was interesting and had a driving force behind it. I really liked the contrasts you made within it.
Undiscovered-Creations chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
This poem was incredibly short, but the structure was effective. A great poem. I loved the ending.

Good job!
uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I like how the line before the last differs with the whole 'give back' bit.

But what I especially liked was how you separated the last 'taken' with a period.

I just love little twists like that. )

Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Clever - you make taken stand out and drum it out like something's been lost or 'taken'. Can I ask what it was that was taken?
Eleantris chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Despite its shortness, I absolutely loved this! The repetition was great, and I really liked how the poem evolved nicely. Great work!