Reviews for Emptiness
knockmeoffmyfeet chapter 1 . 7/28/2022
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jakeblack chapter 8 . 9/8/2019
santa is real, he is the worlds parents combined, and also love the frickin story man i can relate to astrid in so many ways, if u wanna speak to me message my main acc called jonas reynolf, zulu charlie over and out!
Guest chapter 55 . 11/25/2017
Please update!
Guest chapter 55 . 5/27/2017
Good n besttt story.
You have not updated for over a year...
Please update.
Hope u are in the pink of health
jms4reader chapter 55 . 6/2/2016
Hi TLTH14! How did the last semester of college go? Well, I know that you have other stuff to do, but if you have the next chapter ready, it would be really cool to read it :) Anyways, have a nice day!
IcanzIIravor chapter 55 . 5/26/2016
I'm agnostic, but I will hope your GPA is to your liking.

I think this is a good opportunity to really grow Leon's character. I remember the younger Leon, so it will be cool to see him also delving into who is hurting the 'losers' of the school from his own core dislike of people mistreating others. With his charisma, determining and his own growth I think he can play a major part in this arc from his own perspective. Be good refocusing showing just how intelligent he is when combined with his emotions and honesty.

I think Keir's story can take a back burner during this story arc for the moment. I mean he can come back into the situation since Risk has recruited Frankie to help find out who is behind the murders. Could be a good way of Keir slowly realizing how much he cares about Frankie, as she really has never been in danger herself. It's often when the chips are down you realize who you really care about.

I am enjoying the slow burn of Jiro and Granite too. As always I am in awe of how you know how to slowly change your characters and bring on a natural feel of growth with the various relationships. Kudos. I think Red will play a part as well through Risk. I am almost sad that the story is almost finished. If you don't continue into a million plus words ( muhuhahaha ) then I fully expect future books involving these characters. I mean we still have college and after college!
IcanzIIravor chapter 54 . 5/26/2016
Wow, is all I can say. This was an Astrid moment though, so this fit into her character. I also think she finally found someone she truly cares about beyond anything, so she was bound to be frightened and want to push Leon and to a lesser degree the others away in an attempt to keep them safe. It will be interesting seeing how determined she will be to solve the mystery. She snapped once (with her dad) and Leon was there to save her from going too far. Can't wait to see when she catches whoever is behind this and takes out her fear, anger and frustration on them for threatening Leon's life. This story is awesome.
IcanzIIravor chapter 53 . 5/25/2016
Woa...dammmit, things are heating up. Just when it looked like Leon and Astrid would finally become a couple, you turn the heap up! I want to shout, throw my hands up and applaud at the same time. This is one hell of a story arc. How do you come up with this. Genius.

I feel really bad for Frankie. She is being eaten up inside feeling alone in a group. Keir better come around or shake the heck out of him. I am liking the slow growth from Jiro, though. His story is interesting as he slowly truly becomes his own person. He and Granite will make a dynamic combo when they come together. Two broken halfs that are stronger together. What a great story.
IcanzIIravor chapter 51 . 5/25/2016
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Amazing talent. Just remember thwt the beauty of posting it on a site like this is there is no deadline to do an update. I'd rathercwait for months, or even years for the next fantastic chapter than for you to post something you aren't satisfied with. Real life comes first:)

That being said I am damn near squealing like a school girl at Astrid and Leon's first date. I don't care if this story takes a million words to tell the complete story of all their lives. The journey has been a pleasure.
IcanzIIravor chapter 38 . 5/20/2016
I don't smoke, but I feel like I need a carton after this chapter. Awesome, awesome end to it. FINALLY. I feel like I just finished watching the end to the Shawshank Redemption. I don't know what the future holds, but at this very moment, all is right with the world.
IcanzIIravor chapter 35 . 5/20/2016
WTF man. She is letting her father knock her around?! WTF. I feel like jumping into the story, beating her father senseless, jumping back out of the story and then reading on.
IcanzIIravor chapter 3 . 5/19/2016
I like Astrid, but Leon is my hero.
jms4reader chapter 55 . 3/8/2016
Ah! Grandpa Graves is the best! I just feel that this is getting really tense. Also, it seems to me that those pigs setting up the list aren't behind the murders, or at least directly. It seems that the school councilor is connected, but how, and why are the students being murdered!?
Also, I feel slightly sorry for Tabitha, but how could she act as if Granite could just forgive and forget as if Tabitha hadn't turned her back on Granite's suffering? That's more than not being there for your family; that's being a bad human! Tabitha should really be on her knees begging Granite for forgiveness. I guess us readers will have to see what happens next.
I hope that you do well in school! Retaking Calculus must be frustrating, but I think you could do it. Have a good semester!
jms4reader chapter 55 . 3/1/2016
Haven't read the chapter yet, but I'm sure it is good :). Sorry to hear about college struggles, but I'm glad you're dealing with it in a good way. I also have no doubt that you could bring the verbal pain if you wanted :) Good luck with classes, and keep working hard!

Best Wishes,
darlene chapter 3 . 2/29/2016
Why do they all have awful parents? could you please answer?
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