Reviews for Emptiness
Lily806 chapter 37 . 12/25/2013
Wow, that was a long chapter! I can't wait to read the next one D
honestyfirst chapter 37 . 12/25/2013
Faye got what she deserved. Why is she being all 'poor me, everyone's so mean'? Don't mess with Astrid, then! Oh, and that was such a cute moment between Astrid and Leon... ah, my heart aches!

Uh-oh... her mum and mysterious lover! That was shocking! I don't know whether to feel bad for her, or ... I mean, her husband isn't exactly nice. But, cheaters aren't great, either... I don't really know what to think about that...
Guest chapter 36 . 12/16/2013
What. The. Hell. I swear I will kill who mfing ends a story like just know I know where u live...
Jk just kidding though I'm still going to kill you unless update I give u a week or else. Trust me I have a gun.
Ballooca Bollock chapter 36 . 12/15/2013
Great, now you made me cry! Are you happy? Why is she there! I would just beat up her dad and get it over with!
Guest chapter 34 . 12/15/2013
What! Nooooo! Don't hurt Astrid! is Leon coming to her rescue? Is anyone going to come to her rescue!
Guest chapter 33 . 12/15/2013
Okay, I'm dead from all the hidden fluff and I'm jealous. Astrid's friends rock!
nemoskull chapter 36 . 12/10/2013
cant wait for next update!
BOONIK chapter 36 . 12/1/2013
UPDATE SOON!
PLEASE?
GoodStoryAnyone chapter 36 . 12/1/2013
Ohmygosh! I have soooo much to say...
I've literally only been reading this for a week and couldn't put my phone away! My dad has got really pissy at me but I don't care... I TOTALLY ADORE THIS STORY
I love the way you write3
anywayyy... why are her family such PRICKS?! I want to kill her dad and I just love Leon and his family ohmygoahh... I'd rather have it that she lived with them...
But whats happen to Tuesday and Argon? What is Leon going to do? When are Granite and Jiro get together, likewise with Keir and Frankie? Does Misa get treated the same way and what about Astrid's little brother?! :O I'm sooo sorry about the 21 questions but... Seriously! Like... I l. Just. LOVEEE your storyyyyy*-* and you! Love your writing! Can't wait till your next update hehe till then
p.s I' glad I've foubd this story... I couldn't find any good stories on here tht made me want to make an account but you have accomplished! Sorry for this essay TT_TT
fandomnerd12 chapter 36 . 12/1/2013
I'm just going to dig a hole and lie in it until you update next. Just kidding. No rush btw. Astrid and Leon are my OTP. I love their relationship. And your grammar is improving if you're wondering. And her family, excluding Nathaniel and Kamden, are complete asses. I wanna drop them into Tartarus. Pf course, just loving the story more as Astrid and Leon's relationship becomes more intimate and the family feud. Have a fun remainder of your Thanksgiving break (:
Guest chapter 36 . 11/29/2013
Thank you for updating this amazingly long chapter! I loved it, but did not enjoy the part about Astrid's dad abusing her. Please update soon so that all of your readers, including yours truly, can find out how Leon will save Astrid, and why Astrid can't just kick her dad's ass already. I mean, come on, she knows all these Kung fu panda skills, but is afraid to use them! I realize this is just a story, but abusive parents are a disturbing topic for everyone, and your followers are way too emotionally invested in your story to just let these things go. I guess what I'm trying to say, is UPDATE SOON! Please
fandomnerd12 chapter 29 . 12/1/2013
Favorite chapter excluding the first ten (: oh and I meant chapter 36 but oh well. Also I picture Victorique du Blois (forgo how to spell the name)as Astrid. She's an anime character from the anime Gosick. They also have some similar mannerisms. It's a wonderful anime, you should check it out if you haven't. For some reason, I picture Leo Valdez from Heroes of Olympus as Leon not because of the name but personality.
Guest chapter 35 . 11/28/2013
:o
I'm a monster! So update fasta! Jk, take your time...
fandomnerd12 chapter 18 . 11/30/2013
I keep hearing Eska's or Mandy's voice in my head when Astrid actually talks or her thoughts. Eska's from Legend of Korra and Mandy from The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy. I'm excited to see Astrid's birthday party. Anyways I will review again once I have caught up to chapter 26.
fandomnerd12 chapter 17 . 11/30/2013
I am nearly halfway to catching up and I just want to say your story is amazing despite a few mechanical mistakes. I really like Mr. Holiday because he's right. My biology classmates do not read for fun nor do they have fun reading anything. My other classes, I don't really know. More of a mix. Ms. Berri irritates me so much. I'm loving Astrid because she is basically the embodiment of my general emotion towards my classmates, I like Leon of course mainly because I ship him and Astrid and his personality. I'll be reviewing at the end of chapter 18 and your current chapter because I understand how much reviews mean to the author whether it be appreciation, flame, or constructive criticism. Omfg. This is the longest review I've given. All in all, loving the story (:
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