|Reviews for Emptiness|
| Amber Dawn12 chapter 23 . 10/30/2012
This was a sort of filler chapter, right? But it still had a sort of action thing to it. PLEEEEAASE MAKE SOMETHING ROMANTIC HAPPEN!
| Imagination Intoxication Girl chapter 23 . 10/25/2012
Oh... My... Gosh... You did not just give me an F-ing cliff hanger... #$& *#*$*&* % !
XD :P ;)
| Guest chapter 23 . 10/7/2012
Wow. Just flipping wow. I've been reading this story for the last three days, and I think you're a pretty amazing person to be able to write such a good story. Keep the awesomeness going please.
| Neo Rulez chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Love your story its a great. I just love how you made.
| whatthegreencarrot chapter 23 . 9/14/2012
[She then took in his entire face as a whole, forcing her eyes else ware.] You mean, elsewhere?
[It was his scarred hand he was holding.] He or she? I'm not entirely clear on that one, but it looks like it should be a she.
[Feeling a tug that snapped him out of his thoughts, he was in front of a cahier] Cashier, I think. And
[And with a colder attitude than the worker's, he backed off, with a faltering glare as five minutes later, he plopped down two bags that smelted of warm food with a hint of grease as an undertone.] I don't think "smelted" fits this. Smelted means to melt or fuse; I think you're looking for the word "smelled" or "smelt." Depends on which place you're from. I didn't really get the [And with a colder attitude than the worker's, he backed off] part. What did you mean, who backed off?
Anyway, sorry that I didn't get around to reviewing all of your chapters, I'll see if I can get to it later. Lots of homework and all...but I'll see if I can find time to review all 23 of your chappies. This is a captivating story, update soon! Please?
| Verity29 chapter 23 . 9/14/2012
Arghhh will you ever stop being so epic?! Update soon! Xxx
| findings chapter 23 . 9/14/2012
I tried so hard not to laugh when they were at Brandi's, cause you see, I was at school! I love this story so much I would risk getting caught! Anyways, I love the way Leon blushes! Bye!
| heal me forever chapter 22 . 9/14/2012
god i love love dis stry..its BANG ON...really fablous job blesss cant wait for d nxt part update ASAP :)
| SargentLooneyPencil chapter 23 . 9/13/2012
HEY! I love this chapter. Their close proximity is beautiful! )
| whatdotheydream chapter 23 . 9/13/2012
That was adorable. And Hilarious. . I love, love, love it!
| Swiftluver101 chapter 23 . 9/13/2012
Ahhhh!AWESOME! This just keeps on getting better and better. Your story has a strong theme, a fascinating plot, a fitting structure, unforgettable characters, a well-chosen setting, and an appealing style. GOOD JOB! I have been thinking of adding your story to my community, if you dont mind that is... Also could you please see my new story-ish thing. I need staff members for a new community I am creating, thanks.
| Lily806 chapter 22 . 9/13/2012
YAY! u UPDATED! XD I totally did NOT know u were on vacation...u deserve it! School has started for me...actualy i started on August 1st so, I've been busy with homework an stuff. I REALLY Like ur story! It's very...eventful? well i guess a better word for it would be...intruiging. so, keep up the good work! xD
| whatdotheydream chapter 22 . 9/11/2012
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! YES!YES!YES! YOU UPDATED! OMG-I'm so happy! . Duh. But seriously. THIS MADE MY DAY. I can't wait 'til next chapter! I love this story so much, I had a nightmare in which you never finished it. ):
Good Luck! .
| Swiftluver101 chapter 22 . 9/10/2012
Amazing! I cant believe its already been a year. Awww your baby (the story) is growing im happy to hear that you will be updating 2-3 chappies this week!YAY! This story is just amazing, beautifully written, not too rushed and yet just the right amount of action/mystery and romance! I love how the last sentence is "We'll have to stay till morning." AWWWWWWWWW! Astrid and leon are just too cute! You should also post your story on wattpad, I think EMPTINESS would have a good chance to win the Watty Awards 2012!
| findings chapter 22 . 9/10/2012
This chapter was great! I love how Leon's and Astrid's relationship is growing and how he can't stay mad at her! adorable. :)