Reviews for Emptiness
Bibliophilesunite chapter 31 . 9/5/2013
No anger from me, I loved it despite it being upsetting. In fact, I loved everything so far.

Poor Astrid, she's such a complicating character that I never imagined her being hurt. But of course that's ridiculous, we're all falliable.

I think your writing is exceptional, I'm so glad to come across this story :)
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 31 . 9/5/2013
Hello :) Lovely chapter. I like the whole valentines day scene and the jealousy and the emotions portrayed were beyond amazing. I can only hope the read the next chapter soon. Great job and have fun :)
worthwritingfor chapter 31 . 9/4/2013
Dude dude dude dude DUDE.
That. Was. Awesome.
This is becoming my favorite story! Update as soon as you can! :)
Tekiri chapter 31 . 9/4/2013
"Unknown to Leon, Astrid became more frozen.
Unknown to Astrid, Leon's eye's lost their naïve heat that evening."
WHAT JUST HAPPENED HERE! (looks around for a frying pan to beat you with. then stops.) On hindsight, you wouldn't be able to write if you were dead, soooo... I'm not part of the angry mob, but I WILL sponsor then. :P
Gah! Leon and Astrid! What are we gonna do with you!
PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER! I CAN'T WAIT!
(sry this is all jumbled, i'm just a fangirl over here that is just shocked about those two quoted lines.)
findings chapter 31 . 9/4/2013
Aw I loved the flashback3
And I'm glad they didn't really have a moment...I feel as though they need more time.
By the way...are they in 9th grade?
You say No chapter 31 . 9/4/2013
No, I think this is needed. But what's going to happen with her friends? Will she be ice cold to them? Will she act as if everything's okay? Or well continue as usual and treating Leon as usual making him feel like shit? And oh god, what's going to happen with Faye?
Btw I really actually don't understand much of why Alexis hates Astrid, mostly cause of the Mister Red right? Er sorry I need to re-read your story. Honestly though if Leon thought she was going to be affected by it I think he was sort of cocky despite that fact that she was, because did he actually know that she liked him? Cause I couldn't tell... Well anyways, I feel sadistic for smiling during this chapter, also i was really confused at the Riske T. Part but I'm glad now that I understand that he was dressed as a girl. I'm such an airhead.
Lily806 chapter 30 . 8/15/2013
They're only 15? ...i seriously don't know what gave me the idea that they were 17 O_O ...but...omg! Astrid is j-e-a-l-o-u-s XD I can totally tell that in the next chapter either she will try to ignore it, or she doesn't know what it is XD
Morgan Lenay chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
I love this chapter! It is truly amazing. There is great emotion behind this. Keep writing and update soon!
SLP chapter 29 . 8/8/2013
Hey :) It's me again. I just wanted to ask you this: When are you going to update? I am on my toes waiting for the next chapter :) No pressure though. I was just asking. Happy writing and take care. Hope to read the next chappie of emptiness really soon! :D
Dreaminglight chapter 16 . 8/9/2013
What's the song that describes Astrid? I really want to know!
Dreaminglight chapter 13 . 8/9/2013
Who drew the painting? Leon?
Dreaminglight chapter 11 . 8/9/2013
Haha! Jiro got lucky Astrud didn't do anything this time he got saved by the black guy. Though I would have liked to know what Astrid would have done to him if she didn't get interrupted.
BrownEyedCutie99 chapter 30 . 8/8/2013
I know for a fact that when Faye goes up to Leon again, she will be blown off because he doesn't like her like that. Astrid is also probably going to interfere. Am I right?
Dreaminglight chapter 8 . 8/8/2013
If she doesn't sleep on the bed where does she sleep?
Dreaminglight chapter 7 . 8/8/2013
Really liked their encounter in the auditorium. Especially how you narrated it. How it happened from both side and what and how they saw each others eyes
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