|Reviews for Emptiness|
| PhantomPrincess chapter 28 . 4/1/2013
Done w/ one drama. Turning up another...
| anon1 chapter 27 . 4/1/2013
ohamygosh. you had me with this prank. huhu cried figuratively! hahahaha happy april fools! and HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! :D
| FishXD chapter 28 . 4/3/2013
This, as you mentioned already, was waaaaaaaaaayyyy too short. I loved this. And it seems we have a new character too! I love this. Now hurry and update!
| Lori Jane Summers chapter 28 . 4/2/2013
More more please ;P LOVE IT!
| findings chapter 28 . 4/2/2013
I thought Red's POV was interesting, as well as Faye's, but I would much rather have Astrid's or Leon's POV. (Although Kamden's POV was much needed!) Oh geez, I can't wait to see how this plays out!
| Insanity Fuels My Imagination chapter 28 . 4/2/2013
... You have the same birthday as me...
Anyways: yaaaaayyyyy, you've updated! *happy dances around room*
Why does her mum want Astrid back? And what is Alexis gonna do?
Please update so I can find out (not to mention everyone else who reads this story).
| heal me forever chapter 28 . 4/2/2013
god dis stry is like awesum ...great chapter...!i dnt like alexis xoxoxox
update soon :DDD
| SargentLooneyPencil chapter 28 . 4/2/2013
I liked it. Nice chapter. :) I am eternally grateful that you managed to update. Good luck and hope to read the next chapter really soon!
| worthwritingfor chapter 28 . 4/1/2013
YOU CAN'T DO THAT.
Update soon please. xx
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/27/2013
have you abandoned this story? ever updating? :x
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/16/2013
| Kawaiilover chapter 11 . 1/29/2013
UUmmm. Hajimemashite TLTH-san. This is my first time writing a review on Fictionpress, so thank you for the opportunity. I love the originality of Emptiness and have been an avid reader since later 2011, and cannot wait for more chappies to come out in 2013. I just adore Astrid's calmness in any situation. Make those arrogant adults and adolescent bimbos feel like their baka)
Eto, on another note, maybe it is just me, but when i read this chapter, Granite reminded me of Hinata from naruto, and even more so when she interacts with Jiro... and then I see naruto in Jiro. and then more friends had parallels to naruto characters as more chapters came along.
It became like this
Granite Hinata (stutters)
Jiro Naruto (hyperprankster-like)
Kier Shikamaru (sleep yet vigil)
Red Gaara (...red Jiro friendship)
Gomen nasai(please don't be mad TmT), I am an avid naruto reader, and was a naruto fanfiction fan for years, so I apologise if my imagination has gotten the best of me.
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/3/2013
please update soonish, kay? (: i love this story, would love to read more. xx
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/3/2013
updateee pleaseeee :(
| Insanity Fuels My Imagination chapter 26 . 1/2/2013
Gods, this is such a good story. It's amazing. Epic. I've been reading it for a couple of days, and it only got better as the story went on. I really hope you continue to write more awesome chapters!