|Reviews for Emptiness|
| Verity29 chapter 22 . 9/10/2012
Yayy thanks for the fifteen mins of fame ;) OK you did take your time to update but you updated and that's what matters (epic chapter by the way...) Nothing much to say other than rave about the awesomeness of you and this story!? Update soooooon I dislike waiting greatlyyy. Teehee.
- verity Xx
PS I am deeply in love with this story. Bye.
| SargentLooneyPencil chapter 22 . 9/9/2012
Hello. I have to say, I absolutely loved this chapter. I loved every bit of it. ). i can't wait for the next chapter.!
| AisonX chapter 22 . 9/9/2012
HAPPY BIRTHDAY EMPTINESS!
Well, sorry bout that. A late birthday by one day.
Anyway, I'm loving this ) I LOVE ASTRID D Though I WOULD probably be pretty freaked out if I had met someone like her. D
| Randie chapter 21 . 9/1/2012
CCCCCOOOOOOOOOOOONNNTTTTTTII IIINNNNNUUEEEEE!... I think I spelt that wrong...
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/10/2012
Lovely story but when r u going to UPDATE FINALLY ! I've waited for over a MONTH Plz update soon one of my favorite stories but UPDATE SOON
| worthwritingfor chapter 21 . 8/11/2012
When will you update next? Soon? :D
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/2/2012
| Alyson101 chapter 16 . 7/26/2012
FOR CHAPTER 21:
ALRIGHT! I CAN FINALLY REVIEW! I couldnt b4 because i was to lazyto make an account... Gr8 chapter a bit confusing at the end but still great Updat3 soon! I am trying to complement you on your superb writing skills but I keep finding myself in positions where I am afraid of coming across as creepy, sycophantic, patronizing, and/or a thousand other awful things, and it’s annoying me. So ill just say you're amazing please update sooner and keep up the super amazing work! BTW i meant to rebiew chapter 21 so Update we r dying here.I literally check everyday if youve updated so please do! Itl make my day a little brighter!
| Amber Dawn12 chapter 21 . 7/23/2012
Hey, its been over a week since you've reviewed! Come on, I'm practically at the edge of my seat. Well, bed. Anyway, I love how you're characters contrast with each other and the way u can mould things together so perfectly, like art. And honestly? This is a masterpiece. So review quicker! Please.
| SargentLooneyPencil chapter 21 . 7/19/2012
Love this chapter.. I just reread it and I cant get enough.. More please!
| PhantomGirl chapter 21 . 7/17/2012
Wow, Leon is a ladies man. Twenty-six phone numbers, and he is only 14/15? By the way, how did Leon know Astrid was in NYC?
Only part I thought that was sad was when Kamden was sooo mean to Leon. :(
Lastly, How long is Astrid's fringe (I like the UK slang for bangs better for some reason) that you described in chapter 19 when she was fixing Leon's cuts? Did it actually go over her eyes because you always describe them as emotionless when people see them, but if it went to the bottom of her ears you can't see her eyes.
Great work and update soon.
| whatdotheydream chapter 21 . 7/17/2012
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! I LOVE the characters, they all have personalities, they all have reasons, I LOVE the plot, it's interesting and VERY EXTREMELY intruiging, that I have already mentioned. Astrid seemed unfeeling, but she's NOT, she's actually really complicated and I LOVE her and Leon's relationship, and my only complaint is that I've finished for the time being, until you update again, and I hope it's soon and fast!
So PLEASE, update before I go insane!
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/17/2012
Cliffhanger u left us hanging again ! I love ur story but stop leavin us like that or I'll explode the next time ! Ok ? Great work though and UPDATE SOON
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/16/2012
Wow, i honestly didn't think they would find each other. New York is pretty big.
I hope they get in time for their birthday
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/16/2012
II never finished watching Death Note the anime...It got to scary! I stopped after Misa Misa gave him the eyes. Maybe i'll try the drama