|Reviews for Emptiness|
| Lily806 chapter 39 . 1/1
OMG! Yes! Finally! They have FINALLY kissed. And...it was very well written, if I may so so myself D
| TheRobotQueen chapter 37 . 12/27/2013
Thank you so very much for thinking of us readers during the holiday season. I hope you had a wonderful holiday.
Oh my goodness! Astrid's mom is having an affair. I'm on the fence about Misa. I don't like Mr. Graves. I feel bad for Astrid for having to leave Hollowmill and go to this place.
Well, Faye is just prepared to go beyond all reason, isn't she? I mean, she's just letting this infatuation with Leon Armador blinding her to how cruel she's been.
On the other hand, she was rejected by everybody at the snap of a finger. That has to be a bad day. Granted, she shouldn't have done what she did, I don't condone it in anyway, but it's so odd how one mistake can turn a life around forever.
Poor Peter, now that was just cruel of Faye.
From the small snippets we get of Zaahir, he is so wonderful. I think he's like Astrid, but I don't know if he's as severe and cold as Astrid.
It's funny how she tries to be affectionate for him. And I had completely forgotten about Argon and Tuesday, but now I wonder what's happening to them.
Frankie makes me laugh, how she's concerned with Astrid's hair. And I'd like to see her plans for Leon's.
Leon stood up to Faye!
I always like Astrid's simple honesty. She just tells Leon to stop feeling like the roof incident was his fault, because he didn't do it so it can't be his fault. Oh, Astrid, you're a delight.
This chapter is amazing, and I look forward to what you'll bring the next time you update. So, in case it doesn't happen until January, see you in the New Year!
| Guest chapter 37 . 12/26/2013
NOOOOOOOO PLEASE I STAYED UP ALL NIGHT TO FINISH THIS STORY NOOOOOOOO UPDATE SOON PLEASE I BEG OF YOU. when will leon finally kiss her or something Im getting really axious. whoops spelled it wrong but im too lazy to move the mouse to click it back.
| Guest chapter 37 . 12/26/2013
Omg I knew Dana was cheating on Charlie ! And omg Faye is such a ! Anyway update soon.
| Nskull chapter 37 . 12/28/2013
thank you! now i can sleep in peace.
ur my liteary hero/
| Nathaniel G chapter 37 . 12/27/2013
I spend a night and half a day reading this story none stop. It's just- AH! It is so wonderful and mind-boggling and I just can't describe how much I love this story! All your characters are so interesting and you can't help but adore one & want to shoot and throw another in a ditch to rot. Astrid and the rest are a very unique characters: they made me laugh, cry, and freak out to the point of falling off my seat. I absolutely hate Astrid's father, he should be sent to jail for child abuse. The mother is delusional and Misa is a prick. The only hope this family (immediate, the parents and siblings Grandmother) has left is on Zaafir and he is still impressionable and could get tainted by such sick family members. Astrid better get a restraining order against them. I hope Astrid can live in Hollowmill again– I miss Kamden and his pretty boy face already!
I'm okay with you revamping the story a bit but you must promise me that you will still update! Possibly soon too, lest I cry again (though this time due to you not updating and not because of how the story is going). I look forward to what happens next, hope to see you soon!
| fifikevin073 chapter 37 . 12/27/2013
OMG Zaahir is so cute! And OMG dana is having an affair well I guess I shouldn't have been so surprised but anyway. And what did Faye agree to and god she's such a ...
anyway, I love this story and I'm really glad it's not the usual cliche. You are an amazing author.
| wildgirl777 chapter 37 . 12/26/2013
ooooh I hope she shows her dad. I really hope leon will admit his feelings for astrid and just kiss her and save her from her horrible family. AND then have BABIES hahahah lol no im serious.
| BrownEyedCutie99 chapter 37 . 12/26/2013
Yes! Faye got what she deserved and Leon had a somewhat sweet moment with Astrid! :D Now Astrid just needs to expose her parents for their crimes and she is home free! I know that won't happen too quickly though. Keep up the good work!
| KookieLuver chapter 37 . 12/26/2013
No offense but I don't think you should revise this story untill you finish it. I really really love this story. And I can't wait for Astrid to use those pics against her mother. Merry Day after Christmas and a happy new year. Also, my birthday is on the 4th if you wanna give me a present... *cough* New chapters mabey *cough*... if you want... jk. But even if you don't update the story I can't be mad because this is a very long review and I forgot what the point of it was I'm just gonna try to fill the review box please don't be mad or read this all in one breath because you might die if you do so I will put a period. I just saved your life. You are so welcome.
| SargentLooneyPencil chapter 37 . 12/26/2013
hey :D :D I hate FAYE! With a passion. Where's JIRO? I miss him :P I love love your story.I honestly look forward to reading it every week. :) Kudos
| SaraSabri chapter 37 . 12/25/2013
Perfect! I want Astrid to DESTROY her parents! I dont hate Misa that much because I know she's just mimicking the feelings of her father.. Make Astrid get some dirt on the Grandma too..And I dont mind that you laughed at my comment...All I want is for Astrid to be okay..
| AnonymousGirlWriter chapter 37 . 12/25/2013
Aww, there's some Astrid/Leon fluff... As fluffy as it can get anyway. On some part of my brain I hate you for putting Astrid in this situation, but at the same time YOU UPDATED! Anyway, thanks for updating. It's like a Christmas present. If you want to spruce up this story a bit that's fine with me, but I love this story exactly how it is.
| Lily806 chapter 37 . 12/25/2013
Wow, that was a long chapter! I can't wait to read the next one D
| honestyfirst chapter 37 . 12/25/2013
Faye got what she deserved. Why is she being all 'poor me, everyone's so mean'? Don't mess with Astrid, then! Oh, and that was such a cute moment between Astrid and Leon... ah, my heart aches!
Uh-oh... her mum and mysterious lover! That was shocking! I don't know whether to feel bad for her, or ... I mean, her husband isn't exactly nice. But, cheaters aren't great, either... I don't really know what to think about that...