|Reviews for Drenched|
| AKJSNA chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I loved this poem, I can completly relate.
| Jejuna chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
This is so terribly moving. I'm sorry that you had to feel the way you felt. It's always newly crippling when you break up with someone.
| Cherry Blossom Slushy chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Dear Half Past12,
I like this poem because it tells about how a person can feel when they are confused and do not have a clue as to what to do with there life anymore. This clearly states what you were going through at the time of the bad breakup. Just as I have said in my review for s/2950757/1/Somehow, you try to make it vivid, and let the reader's imagine and possibly feel how you felt. I can only imagine what you went through because I have never had a boyfriend, but you make it so vivid, that I feel how you felt at the time. I know that you think nobody understands, but that is just what you think. I am positive there are a trillion young girls who went through the exact same thing.
The Midnight Game
| WriteImagineDreamEML chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Wow. Depressing, but... Wow.