Reviews for Drenched
AKJSNA chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I loved this poem, I can completly relate.
Jejuna chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
This is so terribly moving. I'm sorry that you had to feel the way you felt. It's always newly crippling when you break up with someone.
Cherry Blossom Slushy chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Dear Half Past12,

I like this poem because it tells about how a person can feel when they are confused and do not have a clue as to what to do with there life anymore. This clearly states what you were going through at the time of the bad breakup. Just as I have said in my review for s/2950757/1/Somehow, you try to make it vivid, and let the reader's imagine and possibly feel how you felt. I can only imagine what you went through because I have never had a boyfriend, but you make it so vivid, that I feel how you felt at the time. I know that you think nobody understands, but that is just what you think. I am positive there are a trillion young girls who went through the exact same thing.


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WriteImagineDreamEML chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Wow. Depressing, but... Wow.