Reviews for Mes Rêves
Cherry Blossom Slushy chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Dear Half Past12,

Well, you did make a few errors such as you put the whole page in French, you misspelled cry, you capitalized tell me; there is an italic icon within the document manager and you could have just used that either or type an exclamation point if you wanted to "yell"; and you typed a comma in front of where you typed tell me.

Nevertheless, I love your poems and I always will. They still express how you feel to your fans, such as me. I am now, officially, a fan of yours.

I like this poem because it tells how a person's life can just as well effect their dreams. A person's nightmares can be remembered and permanently stored in their mind. That's is why it is so important to try to live a happy life. In order to do that you have to believe in Christ. God is the only one who can strengthen people and give them the gift of writing talent.


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