|Reviews for After You|
| sitting.waiting.watching chapter 8 . 9/22/2012
I like the ending very much. Wraps up very well, without a perfect happy ending (which I was not expecting from this story and would not fit). Overall, very very good! Evoked emotion for Ada and the emotions that Ada was feeling, mostly. Awesome job, just great!
| sitting.waiting.watching chapter 7 . 9/22/2012
I know that feeling 'why is the sun shining? It's not a good day.' Good plot and character development throughout. The feelings getting tossed back and forth I felt in my heart. Good job.
| sitting.waiting.watching chapter 4 . 9/22/2012
This is really making me sad now, but that's a good thing! You really invoke some powerful emotion here. It still flows well and I understand what the character is saying. Really, really good!
| sitting.waiting.watching chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
This made me sad and made me think. Both of which are good, actually. Everything flows well and I'm wanting to read more! I like how it's written poetically, it makes a lot of sense to me. Both the story and why it's written like this :) Great job!
| Dani Blade chapter 8 . 10/21/2011
amazing! you are truly gifted!
| ConcreteAngel14 chapter 8 . 10/21/2011
I seriously loved it. This whole thing, if you made it longer you could publish it.
| Dani Blade chapter 6 . 10/9/2011
wow, this is so amazingly heartfelt, so intense, i literally have tears in my eyes, you are truly gifted in writing, dont ever stop
| ConcreteAngel14 chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
... :( I hate being compared to my brothers and sisters it pisses me off so much. Im either really smart or really stupid in their eyes...
| WriteImagineDreamEML chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
Okay... wow. DEPRESSING. But great stuff.