Reviews for Business as usual
lynnsieishere chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
I liked how you started off with a journal entry and foreshadowing for later in the story. It was always very well written. Nicely done :)
HellsRolling chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
nice prologue I'm reviewing this for you my friend well this is a great story I have nothing else to say
Dan Gregory chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Interesting prologue. I'll go on and read chapter one and see what happens next.