|Reviews for Come Take A Walk With Me|
| AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I really liked this piece again. ITS WAS AMAZING!
I love the line 'before I lost my way in this big world'
Brilliant piece. Just great :-)
| SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Fantastic piece. There are some really beautiful, powerful lines in this - one that really got to me is: "You're the angels I can't see".
You tell a story and make a strong point. The writing is excellent - the only things I can think to improve are little grammatical tweaks. For example, I feel that ellipses (...) can really weaken writing and are usually unnecessary, especially in this piece.
A fitting tribute.
| Choseporfante chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I really liked it. Like you, i doubt banyone/b could forget that day, those people, both victims and heroes.
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
this is sooooooooooo sad...This is a really fitting and sweet poem though to remeber9/11
it was a big tragedy and you wrote a greet poem for it (: