|Reviews for Marvin's Bad Day|
| Lizzy Goldfish chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
great story! its a little quick paced you might want to try and slow down some add some detail but its really good! I'm new, and I saw you where too!(read it on the how many teen writers post XD) i was wondering if you could review mine too mabye tell me how i can edit it... lol maybe tell me how to edit XD
| Sprayer456 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
It's ok for your first story.